▫️▪️▫️ Bleak Mornings ▪️▫️▪️

[Life Storm]

Shrouded dawns ▪️▫️
Bitter coffee ▪️▫️
Silent longing ▪️▫️
Endless waiting ▪️▫️

Alone, alone, my heart is cracking to
million pieces▪️▫️

Echoing, pleading distant weeps of heart-rending pains▪️▫️

Devoured, consumed by savagely
restless emotions ▪️▫️

I, marvel at the slow birth of a new sun
infusing life into yet another dull day▪️▫️

With or without, fragments of your
memories topple over like ruins of abandoned old souls▪️▫️

Alone, alone, alone ▪️▫️
I, plead, alone ▪️▫️

🖤▪️▫️

Life Storm@ 2019

[bulushi-4ever]

Why don’t you spend some time with your self so you don’t feel alone ?

[Life Storm]

Why don’t you spend some time with your self so you don’t feel alone ?

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This one is a poem dear. ����
You are welcome to read and analyze it the way you want ��

[نبض الاندلس]

Nice one

Keep going

[bulushi-4ever]

�� �� ��
This one is a poem dear. ����
You are welcome to read and analyze it the way you want ��

I know

But you wrote it , so I should ask you the question
The feeling you try to express in your poem if it is not real won't be that good ... so feel really lonely and re write it

[فايرسلاش]

sometimes work can be stressful ,alone in everything you strive to do good but left alone where nobody would help to make work days better
my own understanding .

[bulushi-4ever]

sometimes work can be stressful ,alone in everything you strive to do good but left alone where nobody would help to make work days better
my own understanding .

Don’t tease her more

Enough what I did

It is just a meaningless poem .... I mean non relevant one

[مزودة]

Don’t tease her more

Enough what I did

It is just a meaningless poem .... I mean non relevant one

hi how are you!?

[فايرسلاش]

Don’t tease her more

Enough what I did

It is just a meaningless poem .... I mean non relevant one

why? explaining a good poem is an art by itself, it may amuse or inspire the writer.....or be followed by an angry mob

[Life Storm]

Thanks for the comments and the compliments bulushi-4ever
I really appreciate your intake in the thread.

[Life Storm]

Thanks for the comments and the compliments bulushi-4ever
I really appreciate your intake in the thread.

[bulushi-4ever]

hi how are you!?

@مزودة

chatting has it own thread , please follow the rules or you will be dealing with mods

[bulushi-4ever]

Thanks for the comments and the compliments bulushi-4ever
I really appreciate your intake in the thread.

am not sure what compliment you are talking about but you are welcome

[bulushi-4ever]

why? explaining a good poem is an art by itself, it may amuse or inspire the writer.....or be followed by an angry mob

no body can explain it unless he or she the one who wrote it, but we can try to interpret what they try to say ....

[Radioactivity]

@Life Storm

I am alone because there is no refuge, finally from myself.

Until I confront myself in the eyes and hearts of others,

I will be running, until I suffer them to know my secrets,

I have no safety from them, afraid to be known,

I can know neither myself nor any other

I will be alone



(inspired by Richard Beauvais, 1965)




Btw, Madness indeed is a blessing ..... welcome to my world

[ملكة الشتاء]

Sometimes we can be better alone because we realize the real people and the value of beautiful things in our hearts and know whether we choose good or bad and know that inside our souls a lot of beauty and we need to devote some time to know ourselves well. .

Beautiful words/\Continue♡♡

[sweet mooka]

An interesting poem
well written
had a pleasure reading it.

[blaze]

Not bad storm, like the doom and gloom

[AnnaMaria]

eitherways bitter coffee all we NEEEED lol , lookin forward hear more honey

[المترجم المحترف]

Love it.. Keep it up