( A POEM) Personal Scribbles..!

**Elizabeth Bennet** · 02/08/2011 12:09 AM

Three short stanzas revealing three personal prayers..!

1) { for a friend}

My heart rejoices when I find
My hands rising towards the sky.
Prayers escape my lips in peace
To attain warmth for you and I.

************************
2) { for a mean past!}

Cold summery nights shouldn’t last
Therefore I’ve turned to my Lord.
Help me stop the ghosts of the past
Help me knock them down with a board!

***************************
3) { for a sneaky future}

A mirage of the unknown ..
Keep visiting me at night..
Oh Allah clear it so soon..
Let me see what’s out of sight.

1.8.2011

**lucky me** · 02/08/2011 02:42 AM

1) { for a friend}

My heart rejoices when I find
My hands rising towards the sky.
Prayers escape my lips in peace
To attain warmth for you and I.

now this poem i cant comment if i did i think il ruin the beauty of the poem
but this this part is really admirable

loved it i totally need to send this poem to my friends

thx aloot im glad we have a poet member in here

thx again

**lucky me** · 02/08/2011 02:43 AM

and the picture is soo cute :P

**Ocean Tragedy** · 02/08/2011 05:21 AM

Keep it up .. i like what u writing.

**matrioushka** · 02/08/2011 02:16 PM

Originally Posted by Elizabeth Bennet

Three short stanzas revealing three personal prayers..!

1) { for a friend}

My heart rejoices when I find
My hands rising towards the sky.
Prayers escape my lips in peace
To attain warmth for you and I.

************************
2) { for a mean past!}

Cold summery nights shouldn’t last
Therefore I’ve turned to my Lord.
Help me stop the ghosts of the past
Help me knock them down with a board!

***************************
3) { for a sneaky future}

A mirage of the unknown ..
Keep visiting me at night..
Oh Allah clear it so soon..
Let me see what’s out of sight.

1.8.2011

Beautifully expressed feelings

I loved the image, so funny

**Life Storm** · 02/08/2011 08:54 PM

Beautiful scribbles there

Each one has its own taste of sweetness

Thanks for sharing ,,

Accept my humble gift,,

**Elizabeth Bennet** · 02/08/2011 10:50 PM

Originally Posted by lucky me

1) { for a friend}

My heart rejoices when I find
My hands rising towards the sky.
Prayers escape my lips in peace
To attain warmth for you and I.

now this poem i cant comment if i did i think il ruin the beauty of the poem
but this this part is really admirable

loved it i totally need to send this poem to my friends

thx aloot im glad we have a poet member in here

thx again

i appreciate your generous comment..
Go ahead, send it to all your friends...^^

**Elizabeth Bennet** · 02/08/2011 10:51 PM

Originally Posted by matrioushka

Beautifully expressed feelings

I loved the image, so funny

I'm glad you loved my work ^__^

**Elizabeth Bennet** · 02/08/2011 10:52 PM

Originally Posted by Life Storm

Beautiful scribbles there

Each one has its own taste of sweetness

Thanks for sharing ,,

Accept my humble gift,,

Thanks for the sweet comment=)

**lucky me** · 03/08/2011 02:30 AM

Originally Posted by Elizabeth Bennet

i appreciate your generous comment..
Go ahead, send it to all your friends...^^

the least thing i can do is make our great poet mmeber smile

**Elizabeth Bennet** · 03/08/2011 04:31 PM

Originally Posted by lucky me

the least thing i can do is make our great poet mmeber smile

hehehe you have a great sense of humor...=)

**VatO** · 03/08/2011 05:56 PM

I loved all three. So deep, yet simple.
keep bringing them on. The poems I mean.

**Elizabeth Bennet** · 03/08/2011 06:37 PM

Originally Posted by VatO

I loved all three. So deep, yet simple.
keep bringing them on. The poems I mean.

Yeah, sometimes we need a dose of "simple" in our lives..
I'll keep bringing them on for sure..

**lucky me** · 03/08/2011 09:20 PM

Originally Posted by Elizabeth Bennet

hehehe you have a great sense of humor...=)

hey im serious !!

**عاشقة الوردي** · 04/08/2011 12:30 AM

nice scribbles
keep it up sist

**Elizabeth Bennet** · 05/08/2011 12:19 AM

Originally Posted by lucky me

hey im serious !!

Alright then, keep making the great poet smile..^^

**Elizabeth Bennet** · 05/08/2011 12:21 AM

Originally Posted by عاشقة الوردي

nice scribbles
keep it up sist

Thanks sweetie..
Sure=)

**lucky me** · 05/08/2011 02:20 AM

Originally Posted by Elizabeth Bennet

Alright then, keep making the great poet smile..^^

hhh
i sure will 6.^

**Just Miracle** · 05/08/2011 01:47 PM

Hey Reem ^_^
Splendid!
It's great and brave as well to have a decisive
look at the past and a hopeful one at the future!
The simplicity of the words embraces a mesmerizing charm ^_^

**Elizabeth Bennet** · 07/08/2011 04:17 PM

Originally Posted by Just Miracle

Hey Reem ^_^
Splendid!
It's great and brave as well to have a decisive
look at the past and a hopeful one at the future!
The simplicity of the words embraces a mesmerizing charm ^_^

Hey,
well yeah. Hope serves me just well, let alone ignoring the darkest spots of the past..
happy to read your comments..^^

**sentosa** · 07/08/2011 09:41 PM

5 stars

**Elizabeth Bennet** · 10/08/2011 01:08 AM

Originally Posted by sentosa

5 stars

Now that is a very good comment hehe

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