Once upon a time

[1_ عفيف]

I was on my way when a shadow came a stray
Her shadow and mine collided on the way
From the tip of my shoulder I could glance away

Beautiful figure complimented by gipsy hair
Walking like a breeze and her perfume filled the air
I said to myself this is your lucky share

I paused. waiting for her to overtake
And I smiled to her making no mistake
Without thinking I asked do you like cheesecake?”

She smiled back and said I know what’s on your mind
I am not the type who can be tempted or guided like a blind
To me respect is a jewel which I cherish and find

I felt a shame for my hazy talk
Please forgive me and honor me with a walk
I know your dynasty and origin and your folk

Then pave the way for your future girl
Because your ship and mine will soon sail
Let the sky rain, no let it hail

I did my dance without a shame
Tipping one leg and balancing the other the same
Full of joy, I said oh my, oh my today no one can blame

From that day I knew
All good things can always be true
I opened my eyes and stuck on my bed like a glue

A fantasy can happen any time
Just like sugar with touch of lime
This is a story once upon a time.

[cheesecake]

I paused. waiting for her to overtake
And I smiled to her making no mistake
Without thinking I asked do you like cheesecake?”
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i liked this part more because it contains my nick name
what a wonderful poems you are writing boy
mm if i ask you to write a poem about me
will you do that ?

[cheesecake]

see i'm always the first one who is reading your poems

[1_ عفيف]

thanks again
I did Intend to write that.
by the way i adore Newyork cheesecake especialy with rasebery.
have a nice weekend

[cheesecake]

thanks again
I did Intend to write that.
by the way i adore Newyork cheesecake especialy with rasebery.
have a nice weekend

really beautiful words
you deserve to be called EF creative poet
keep it up ..
write another poem and write my nick name there

[the dark knight]

Nonscense ...
Look guys... Its good to copy a style..its good to be so called a poet... Its good to fool us...but by the way you fooling us i have a strong feeling that you are googlin thing and mixin it with some sort of action... Iam never impressed by your whateva called a Poem.. Poems arent just a complexc words that nobuddie understand and its not a way to show off with how good are you with language.. A poem must have an emptionak element which i can see in your thing.. A poem represent a state of heart and mind of the author and i am quite sure you lack this.. Do you understand what im sayin?

[cheesecake]

Nonscense ...
Look guys... Its good to copy a style..its good to be so called a poet... Its good to fool us...but by the way you fooling us i have a strong feeling that you are googlin thing and mixin it with some sort of action... Iam never impressed by your whateva called a Poem.. Poems arent just a complexc words that nobuddie understand and its not a way to show off with how good are you with language.. A poem must have an emptionak element which i can see in your thing.. A poem represent a state of heart and mind of the author and i am quite sure you lack this.. Do you understand what im sayin?

calm down !
he wrote that himself !

[the dark knight]

Cud i call this a poem...

Once upon a time..
With words at mouth and rhyme..
A buddie have a mount to climb..


He look up far.. He set in a bar... Then he drive a car...isnt it bezzar..

And she was standin out there.. Waitin him with fear..and her hear and eyes tear..


Oh what a rubbish..

[the dark knight]

What a poem i have wrote!!...

Com'n Eminem and sing it ..rap it...


Wow.. Crazy guys..just crazy

[cheesecake]

Cud i call this a poem...

Once upon a time..
With words at mouth and rhyme..
A buddie have a mount to climb..


He look up far.. He set in a bar... Then he drive a car...isnt it bezzar..

And she was standin out there.. Waitin him with fear..and her hear and eyes tear..


Oh what a rubbish..

whats wrong with you ?
are you trying to underestimate him ?
if you don't like it no need to comment on his thread

[cheesecake]

What a poem i have wrote!!...

Com'n Eminem and sing it ..rap it...


Wow.. Crazy guys..just crazy

are you here to show us your shoulders and that you are the best here ?
whats wrong with you

[ونة الم]

its really beatiful
go ahead

[cheesecake]

choose your words before you speak and give it enough time to maturity . .. you may hurt him by your comments

[lucky me]

Nonscense ...
Look guys... Its good to copy a style..its good to be so called a poet... Its good to fool us...but by the way you fooling us i have a strong feeling that you are googlin thing and mixin it with some sort of action... Iam never impressed by your whateva called a Poem.. Poems arent just a complexc words that nobuddie understand and its not a way to show off with how good are you with language.. A poem must have an emptionak element which i can see in your thing.. A poem represent a state of heart and mind of the author and i am quite sure you lack this.. Do you understand what im sayin?

hmm well actually you spelled nobuddy wrong it should be nobody ,
2nd thing they dont say you show off with how good are you , wrong they say with how good you are , so please your not welcomed in this thread , either you be nice and like the poem and encourage the poor guy to write poor or you get out of this thread without any further arguments thank you ..

[lucky me]

hey nice poem dont mind dark night he thinks hes the best , i dont want to say anything bad but just dont mind his words let him be
poorr guy he thinks hes the best while ....
so thank you again for the poems and please share us more you have cheesecake to reply shes amazing so just think of how lucky you are that cheesecake replies to oyur threads
good luck and good job

[Bunny]

nice !

keep it up bro !

Just go ahead and don't look back !

[1_ عفيف]

Nonscense ...
Look guys... Its good to copy a style..its good to be so called a poet... Its good to fool us...but by the way you fooling us i have a strong feeling that you are googlin thing and mixin it with some sort of action... Iam never impressed by your whateva called a Poem.. Poems arent just a complexc words that nobuddie understand and its not a way to show off with how good are you with language.. A poem must have an emptionak element which i can see in your thing.. A poem represent a state of heart and mind of the author and i am quite sure you lack this.. Do you understand what im sayin?

load and clear my friend.
thanks for the encourgment! and hay, why don't you google and see if you get the same poem?
you are absoultely right, poems are feeling expressed in words, and that what I have in mind!
don't worry my friend, I have come across your type everyday, and as my father used to say "leave the envyer, he will burn alone"
have a good weekend my friend

[1_ عفيف]

Cud i call this a poem...

Once upon a time..
With words at mouth and rhyme..
A buddie have a mount to climb..


He look up far.. He set in a bar... Then he drive a car...isnt it bezzar..

And she was standin out there.. Waitin him with fear..and her hear and eyes tear..


Oh what a rubbish..

I think you can call it poem, when you know how to spell your words correct!
may allah have mercy on us all

[1_ عفيف]

its really beatiful
go ahead

Thank you dear for your good taste

[1_ عفيف]

choose your words before you speak and give it enough time to maturity . .. you may hurt him by your comments

hay thanks for sticking up, people like him are everywhere, we just have to live with them!!!!

[1_ عفيف]

hmm well actually you spelled nobuddy wrong it should be nobody ,
2nd thing they dont say you show off with how good are you , wrong they say with how good you are , so please your not welcomed in this thread , either you be nice and like the poem and encourage the poor guy to write poor or you get out of this thread without any further arguments thank you ..

Thank you for dropping by!
have a great weekend

[1_ عفيف]

nice !

keep it up bro !

Just go ahead and don't look back !

Thanks for the advice, and acually commen like dark comment are good, because it tells that he had taken part of his time to read.

[lucky me]

Thank you for dropping by!
have a great weekend

thx lol
but i wont trust me on that

[1_ عفيف]

thx lol
but i wont trust me on that

why not?
you will be fine, just have fun!!!!

[the dark knight]

I think you can call it poem, when you know how to spell your words correct!
may allah have mercy on us all

wow... I m not in the mood to let ya no ma style... This is english which ya completely not aware off..i bet ya....lets call it a style for today..at least and typin it at the moment ..no lookin again to correct it usin miscrosoft word are any spellin checkin... At least iam not googlin things....

Ya lost a battle to the knight..

Nighty night
‎

[1_ عفيف]

You accuse of losing a battle to the knight?
who does not know wrong from right!
in EF he always create a fight
buddy if you are dark, I am the moon light.

[قناص بدون عيون]

That's why the whole world looks us down ! insult, humiliate , and make fun of each other instead of giving good wishes to our friends.

Turn a blind eye to whoever envys you ......................


thumbs up..

[1_ عفيف]

That's why the whole world looks us down ! insult, humiliate , and make fun of each other instead of giving good wishes to our friends.

Turn a blind eye to whoever envys you ......................


thumbs up..

Thanks my friend

[فارس الجزيرة]

Great one man made me feel like it's happening infront of me..

Loved the part of ships sailing..

[1_ عفيف]

Great one man made me feel like it's happening infront of me..

Loved the part of ships sailing..

Thanks for passing by.