وردة::وردة: It's Time to komw that ~I Love You~

I Love You and I can't say it To you
I Love You and I wish To See You
I Love You and I wish To Meet You
I Love You and I wish To Live with You[/COLOR]



I Miss You every My Day's Moments and
I can't say that for You every Day


I am nothing without You and
I can't tell You that whenYou are beside me


I am Lonely in this Life withOuT You
and I can't tell You that
I don't want You To Lose a tear
From Your honey eyes For me


I want You To be beside Me
Every Moments in this life


I need You My Love My heart
withOuT You is Incomplete


I need To touch Your Love For Me
I need To touch Your Heart To know
Your Real Love For Me


Don't Let Go
I need You so
Don't Let me cry
I need You So
Don't Let Me Sad
I need You So
Don't Let Me Lose My simle
I need You So


I have no Person To Save Me From
Pains Of Life WithOuT You


I try to Disappear My Great Love FOr You
BuT I can't My heart doesn't let me Disappear
This Truth !!!!
I LOve You 4 ever:وردة:

Romeo it is a dangerous bussiness

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Don't Let me cry

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afaaaaaa dont cry dear :D

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God be with you Mods.

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Originally Posted by Romantic boy

I Love You and I can't say it To you
I Love You and I wish To See You
I Love You and I wish To Meet You
I Love You and I wish To Live with You[/COLOR]



I Miss You every My Day's Moments and
I can't say that for You every Day


I am nothing without You and
I can't tell You that whenYou are beside me


I am Lonely in this Life withOuT You
and I can't tell You that
I don't want You To Lose a tear
From Your honey eyes For me


I want You To be beside Me
Every Moments in this life


I need You My Love My heart
withOuT You is Incomplete


I need To touch Your Love For Me
I need To touch Your Heart To know
Your Real Love For Me


Don't Let Go
I need You so
Don't Let me cry
I need You So
Don't Let Me Sad
I need You So
Don't Let Me Lose My simle
I need You So


I have no Person To Save Me From
Pains Of Life WithOuT You


I try to Disappear My Great Love FOr You
BuT I can't My heart doesn't let me Disappear
This Truth !!!!
I LOve You 4 ever:وردة:

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Hey
Nice try dear
However you need to re-word your poem dear and make it more readable and feel able as a romantic poem.
I suggest you should not translate the lateral words of Arabic to English you should look for alternative words resembles what you want to present or mean.
If you need a review or somebody to give you a helping hand, please do ask you will always find somebody will be keen to help.
All the best mate and good effort for trying

I am nothing without You_seriously!!
if ya r nothing without her ya'll still be NOthing with her - at least that is the way I see it :S
nice start and good luck

sweeet,,,,good luck

كيف حالكم

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Originally Posted by Romantic boy

I Love You and I can't say it To you
I Love You and I wish To See You
I Love You and I wish To Meet You
I Love You and I wish To Live with You[/COLOR]



I Miss You every My Day's Moments and
I can't say that for You every Day


I am nothing without You and
I can't tell You that whenYou are beside me


I am Lonely in this Life withOuT You
and I can't tell You that
I don't want You To Lose a tear
From Your honey eyes For me


I want You To be beside Me
Every Moments in this life


I need You My Love My heart
withOuT You is Incomplete


I need To touch Your Love For Me
I need To touch Your Heart To know
Your Real Love For Me


Don't Let Go
I need You so
Don't Let me cry
I need You So
Don't Let Me Sad
I need You So
Don't Let Me Lose My simle
I need You So


I have no Person To Save Me From
Pains Of Life WithOuT You


I try to Disappear My Great Love FOr You
BuT I can't My heart doesn't let me Disappear
This Truth !!!!
I LOve You 4 ever:وردة:

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All this word i can said to my best love is my Mom.......