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Thread: Spoon and Other Eatable Items
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05/09/2017 08:24 PM #1
Spoon and Other Eatable Items
Spoon and Other Eatable Items
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The first time I have ever seen such a beautiful human being was in an unplanned moment of me being in a mall, near a Baskin Robbins ice-cream shop. My eyes widened a bit as I blinked more than once to wash away the fogginess of the dull surroundings. I was with a third party friend, as I called him. He was a friend of a friend. Not someone really close to me. He noticed that I took a sudden interest to order a parcel of a mango flavored ice-cream from Baskin Robbins. He couldn’t be much persuaded when I told him that I must order an ice-cream. For a fake compensation, I told him that I will buy an extra ice-cream for him to relish on.
I was doing so to get a closer look at her. I wanted to see her up close and observe her social demeanors in public. I entered the shop, while my friend stood outside checking his mobile phone. The girl I saw up close was even more elegant than the early first impressions. There was something different about her eyes. She looked at me for a brief second; I thought I saw someone from the back of my mind, someone from my dreamland visions. I thought I knew her since forever. There wasn’t any flaw or tint in her fair skin. I passed right next to her and glanced at her ice-cream order. She was having a strawberry- chocolate chips flavor, a richly common delicious choice of an ice-cream. She was savoring that with other three girls which I assumed her close friends. I ordered for a takeaway and waited while my sense of hearing was highly sharp. I froze in my ground trying to pick up the tone of her voice among the other voices. I identified hers when the other girls stopped talking to listen to her joke.
Her words were soothing segments of joy to my ear, yet there was a melancholic tone to them. I sensed that she was calculating her spoken words on purpose. She did not want to say as much. Although she spoke very little, I enjoyed her refined conversations with her friends. It was the time for me to leave with my ice-cream parcel. I looked back to see her one last time. Before I hold the door knob, her eyes found mine in a split second and all I saw a faint smile and a mouthful spoon of ice-cream making its way to her mouth!
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Last edited by Life Storm; 06/09/2017 at 12:08 AM.
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hmmmmm
Perfecto
So it is a love from first sight ♡
Nice story
Keep up the good writing
Hmmmmmm..
Just a quick one...
, while my friend stood outside check his mobile phone. T
Is it check or checking?
Last edited by برنس نزواني; 11/09/2017 at 11:30 PM.
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06/09/2017 12:06 AM #3
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Hmmmmm...
Most welcome...
No issues MAM...
I just thought it is better to clear the issue with you..
And in general, what I really liked is the moral of the story.
It is well written. I guess you have a bright imagination
Looking forward to read next story
Hope to pass again here some time
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11/09/2017 08:19 PM #5
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@Life Storm
some of the words were sweet!!
Umm, did i hear a wired voice hidden between the words ?
what is the plot ?
hey! hey! why u called him a third party (working class )
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13/09/2017 07:16 PM #8
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13/09/2017 07:24 PM #9
Hey there
What words were the sweet ones?
And can you be kind and tell me what's the weird voice you think is hidden between
the words? It is essential for me to know how you think.
The third party person is just there to add a pinch of a spice on the story.
Some characters seem out of the place but they actually serve a purpose.
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Ola Again seniorita..
So, let's figure out something that would work on this mood unaccountable changes !!
Once the mood is up, write a romantic story...
Once it's down, write a horror story...
And there you go...issue have been solved !
Hmmmmm...
I still look specifically for the moral of the story...
Characters are just a taste of the writer...
Bless you...
Adios..
@Life Storm
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These are some words, I looked up because I don’t know them before. (parcel Britch word”, relish on, demeanors, tint, glance, segments of joy, melancholic, refined and faint)
Umm, I don’t know if there is a such saying in English I sensed that she was calculating her spoken words on purpose” , how come calculating words, it might be a metaphor, however, that’s in Arabic rhythm not English, what u think ?
Umm, for a fake compensation!!
Why you got interested in the girl and her order or where (I lost myself) and not making a conversation with her nor her friends!
Just looking and sensations!!
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@Life Storm
people rarely write here!
so we appreciate you for sharing tho
do you read alot of books ?
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17/09/2017 11:47 AM #13عضو عميد
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who's she ? I read the story but i did not pick up the past history you share with her!
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16/08/2018 01:59 AM #14
943 views since almost a year ago!
How nostalgic!
And to top it, this thread remaind on the front page the whole year as well!
Thank you very much ghost readers all 943 of you
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21/08/2018 02:20 PM #16
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