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    The first time I have ever seen such a beautiful human being was in an unplanned moment of me being in a mall, near a Baskin Robbins ice-cream shop. My eyes widened a bit as I blinked more than once to wash away the fogginess of the dull surroundings. I was with a third party friend, as I called him. He was a friend of a friend. Not someone really close to me. He noticed that I took a sudden interest to order a parcel of a mango flavored ice-cream from Baskin Robbins. He couldn’t be much persuaded when I told him that I must order an ice-cream. For a fake compensation, I told him that I will buy an extra ice-cream for him to relish on.
    I was doing so to get a closer look at her. I wanted to see her up close and observe her social demeanors in public. I entered the shop, while my friend stood outside checking his mobile phone. The girl I saw up close was even more elegant than the early first impressions. There was something different about her eyes. She looked at me for a brief second; I thought I saw someone from the back of my mind, someone from my dreamland visions. I thought I knew her since forever. There wasn’t any flaw or tint in her fair skin. I passed right next to her and glanced at her ice-cream order. She was having a strawberry- chocolate chips flavor, a richly common delicious choice of an ice-cream. She was savoring that with other three girls which I assumed her close friends. I ordered for a takeaway and waited while my sense of hearing was highly sharp. I froze in my ground trying to pick up the tone of her voice among the other voices. I identified hers when the other girls stopped talking to listen to her joke.
    Her words were soothing segments of joy to my ear, yet there was a melancholic tone to them. I sensed that she was calculating her spoken words on purpose. She did not want to say as much. Although she spoke very little, I enjoyed her refined conversations with her friends. It was the time for me to leave with my ice-cream parcel. I looked back to see her one last time. Before I hold the door knob, her eyes found mine in a split second and all I saw a faint smile and a mouthful spoon of ice-cream making its way to her mouth!


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    Last edited by Life Storm; 06/09/2017 at 12:08 AM.
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    hmmmmm

    Perfecto

    So it is a love from first sight ♡

    Nice story


    Keep up the good writing

    Hmmmmmm..

    Just a quick one...


    , while my friend stood outside check his mobile phone. T


    Is it check or checking?

    Last edited by برنس نزواني; 11/09/2017 at 11:30 PM.
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    يا زهرةَ التوليب يا وجه الهوى
    و بـريـقَـه و نـسـيـمَـه و شـذاه
    ما إن أراكِ أحس قلبي خافقاً
    وأقول بين جوانحي .. الله
    يا زهرةٍ بين الضلوعِ طويتُها
    كانت هديةُ مَنْ .. أنا أهواه
    سبحان من خلق الورود وزانها
    لـتـكـونَ للـمـشـتـاقِ نـبـع حياه


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    Quote Originally Posted by برنس نزواني View Post
    hmmmmm

    Perfecto

    So it is a live from first sight ♡

    Nice story


    Keep up the good writing

    Hmmmmmm..

    Just a quick one...


    , while my friend stood outside check his mobile phone. T


    Is it check or checking?
    A loads of thanks for your proofreading
    That was quite the blunder on my behalf!
    It is rather checking, so the verb choice was wrong or maybe I really
    didn't pay attention to reread again!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Life Storm View Post
    A loads of thanks for your proofreading
    That was quite the blunder on my behalf!
    It is rather checking, so the verb choice was wrong or maybe I really
    didn't pay attention to reread again!
    Hmmmmm...

    Most welcome...

    No issues MAM...

    I just thought it is better to clear the issue with you..

    And in general, what I really liked is the moral of the story.

    It is well written. I guess you have a bright imagination

    Looking forward to read next story

    Hope to pass again here some time
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    يا زهرةَ التوليب يا وجه الهوى
    و بـريـقَـه و نـسـيـمَـه و شـذاه
    ما إن أراكِ أحس قلبي خافقاً
    وأقول بين جوانحي .. الله
    يا زهرةٍ بين الضلوعِ طويتُها
    كانت هديةُ مَنْ .. أنا أهواه
    سبحان من خلق الورود وزانها
    لـتـكـونَ للـمـشـتـاقِ نـبـع حياه


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    Quote Originally Posted by برنس نزواني View Post
    Hmmmmm...

    Most welcome...

    No issues MAM...

    I just thought it is better to clear the issue with you..

    And in general, what I really liked is the moral of the story.

    It is well written. I guess you have a bright imagination

    Looking forward to read next story

    Hope to pass again here some time

    Thanks a bunch for your insight!
    Grateful for your time spent on reading!
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    Un dessein si funeste, S'il n'est digne d'Atrée, est digne de Thyeste

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    Quote Originally Posted by Life Storm View Post
    Thanks a bunch for your insight!
    Grateful for your time spent on reading!
    Good PM / AM sister

    Hmmmmm...

    I believe reading is what I call " Soul Feeding "

    So....

    If you have interest in writing, then please post your next topic ASAP

    and you might mention me to pass here...

    Looking forward to read next topic

    Adios !!
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    يا زهرةَ التوليب يا وجه الهوى
    و بـريـقَـه و نـسـيـمَـه و شـذاه
    ما إن أراكِ أحس قلبي خافقاً
    وأقول بين جوانحي .. الله
    يا زهرةٍ بين الضلوعِ طويتُها
    كانت هديةُ مَنْ .. أنا أهواه
    سبحان من خلق الورود وزانها
    لـتـكـونَ للـمـشـتـاقِ نـبـع حياه


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    Quote Originally Posted by Life Storm View Post
    Spoon and Other Eatable Items


    I

    The first time I have ever seen such a beautiful human being was in an unplanned moment of me being in a mall, near a Baskin Robbins ice-cream shop. My eyes widened a bit as I blinked more than once to wash away the fogginess of the dull surroundings. I was with a third party friend, as I called him. He was a friend of a friend. Not someone really close to me. He noticed that I took a sudden interest to order a parcel of a mango flavored ice-cream from Baskin Robbins. He couldn’t be much persuaded when I told him that I must order an ice-cream. For a fake compensation, I told him that I will buy an extra ice-cream for him to relish on.
    I was doing so to get a closer look at her. I wanted to see her up close and observe her social demeanors in public. I entered the shop, while my friend stood outside checking his mobile phone. The girl I saw up close was even more elegant than the early first impressions. There was something different about her eyes. She looked at me for a brief second; I thought I saw someone from the back of my mind, someone from my dreamland visions. I thought I knew her since forever. There wasn’t any flaw or tint in her fair skin. I passed right next to her and glanced at her ice-cream order. She was having a strawberry- chocolate chips flavor, a richly common delicious choice of an ice-cream. She was savoring that with other three girls which I assumed her close friends. I ordered for a takeaway and waited while my sense of hearing was highly sharp. I froze in my ground trying to pick up the tone of her voice among the other voices. I identified hers when the other girls stopped talking to listen to her joke.
    Her words were soothing segments of joy to my ear, yet there was a melancholic tone to them. I sensed that she was calculating her spoken words on purpose. She did not want to say as much. Although she spoke very little, I enjoyed her refined conversations with her friends. It was the time for me to leave with my ice-cream parcel. I looked back to see her one last time. Before I hold the door knob, her eyes found mine in a split second and all I saw a faint smile and a mouthful spoon of ice-cream making its way to her mouth!


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    some of the words were sweet!!

    Umm, did i hear a wired voice hidden between the words ?
    what is the plot ?

    hey! hey! why u called him a third party (working class )
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    باحث عن حياه في يَمْنٍ وأَمَل!
    في روح تحوم بين المجرات!
    في عالم دنيوي وملكوت رباني !

    لمن يقرأ هذه الحروف ! *،،،،* !
    من كل قلبي , اتمنى لك الخير !
    كان لي وقت ممتع مع أقلام جميله وافكار راقيه


    وداعا سبلة عُمان !

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    Quote Originally Posted by برنس نزواني View Post
    Good PM / AM sister

    Hmmmmm...

    I believe reading is what I call " Soul Feeding "

    So....

    If you have interest in writing, then please post your next topic ASAP

    and you might mention me to pass here...

    Looking forward to read next topic

    Adios !!
    Reading is soul feeding!
    Truly and honestly said..
    I love writing but I struggle with my work timing and my
    own mood swings!
    But, I know that I can do something about it
    I'm still writing part two of this one. It has different characters though.

    Thanks again!
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    Quote Originally Posted by gaoad View Post
    @Life Storm


    some of the words were sweet!!

    Umm, did i hear a wired voice hidden between the words ?
    what is the plot ?

    hey! hey! why u called him a third party (working class )
    Hey there

    What words were the sweet ones?
    And can you be kind and tell me what's the weird voice you think is hidden between
    the words? It is essential for me to know how you think.

    The third party person is just there to add a pinch of a spice on the story.
    Some characters seem out of the place but they actually serve a purpose.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Life Storm View Post
    Reading is soul feeding!
    Truly and honestly said..
    I love writing but I struggle with my work timing and my
    own mood swings!
    But, I know that I can do something about it
    I'm still writing part two of this one. It has different characters though.

    Thanks again!
    Ola Again seniorita..

    So, let's figure out something that would work on this mood unaccountable changes !!

    Once the mood is up, write a romantic story...

    Once it's down, write a horror story...

    And there you go...issue have been solved !

    Hmmmmm...

    I still look specifically for the moral of the story...

    Characters are just a taste of the writer...

    Bless you...

    Adios..
    @Life Storm
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    يا زهرةَ التوليب يا وجه الهوى
    و بـريـقَـه و نـسـيـمَـه و شـذاه
    ما إن أراكِ أحس قلبي خافقاً
    وأقول بين جوانحي .. الله
    يا زهرةٍ بين الضلوعِ طويتُها
    كانت هديةُ مَنْ .. أنا أهواه
    سبحان من خلق الورود وزانها
    لـتـكـونَ للـمـشـتـاقِ نـبـع حياه


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    Quote Originally Posted by Life Storm View Post
    Hey there

    What words were the sweet ones?
    And can you be kind and tell me what's the weird voice you think is hidden between
    the words? It is essential for me to know how you think.

    The third party person is just there to add a pinch of a spice on the story.
    Some characters seem out of the place but they actually serve a purpose.
    These are some words, I looked up because I don’t know them before. (parcel Britch word”, relish on, demeanors, tint, glance, segments of joy, melancholic, refined and faint)

    Umm, I don’t know if there is a such saying in English I sensed that she was calculating her spoken words on purpose” , how come calculating words, it might be a metaphor, however, that’s in Arabic rhythm not English, what u think ?
    Umm, for a fake compensation!!
    Why you got interested in the girl and her order or where (I lost myself) and not making a conversation with her nor her friends!
    Just looking and sensations!!
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    في روح تحوم بين المجرات!
    في عالم دنيوي وملكوت رباني !

    لمن يقرأ هذه الحروف ! *،،،،* !
    من كل قلبي , اتمنى لك الخير !
    كان لي وقت ممتع مع أقلام جميله وافكار راقيه


    وداعا سبلة عُمان !

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    @Life Storm
    people rarely write here!

    so we appreciate you for sharing tho

    do you read alot of books ?
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    باحث عن حياه في يَمْنٍ وأَمَل!
    في روح تحوم بين المجرات!
    في عالم دنيوي وملكوت رباني !

    لمن يقرأ هذه الحروف ! *،،،،* !
    من كل قلبي , اتمنى لك الخير !
    كان لي وقت ممتع مع أقلام جميله وافكار راقيه


    وداعا سبلة عُمان !

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    who's she ? I read the story but i did not pick up the past history you share with her!

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    943 views since almost a year ago!
    How nostalgic!
    And to top it, this thread remaind on the front page the whole year as well!
    Thank you very much ghost readers all 943 of you
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    Quote Originally Posted by Life Storm View Post
    Spoon and Other Eatable Items


    I

    The first time I have ever seen such a beautiful human being was in an unplanned moment of me being in a mall, near a Baskin Robbins ice-cream shop. My eyes widened a bit as I blinked more than once to wash away the fogginess of the dull surroundings. I was with a third party friend, as I called him. He was a friend of a friend. Not someone really close to me. He noticed that I took a sudden interest to order a parcel of a mango flavored ice-cream from Baskin Robbins. He couldn’t be much persuaded when I told him that I must order an ice-cream. For a fake compensation, I told him that I will buy an extra ice-cream for him to relish on.
    I was doing so to get a closer look at her. I wanted to see her up close and observe her social demeanors in public. I entered the shop, while my friend stood outside checking his mobile phone. The girl I saw up close was even more elegant than the early first impressions. There was something different about her eyes. She looked at me for a brief second; I thought I saw someone from the back of my mind, someone from my dreamland visions. I thought I knew her since forever. There wasn’t any flaw or tint in her fair skin. I passed right next to her and glanced at her ice-cream order. She was having a strawberry- chocolate chips flavor, a richly common delicious choice of an ice-cream. She was savoring that with other three girls which I assumed her close friends. I ordered for a takeaway and waited while my sense of hearing was highly sharp. I froze in my ground trying to pick up the tone of her voice among the other voices. I identified hers when the other girls stopped talking to listen to her joke.
    Her words were soothing segments of joy to my ear, yet there was a melancholic tone to them. I sensed that she was calculating her spoken words on purpose. She did not want to say as much. Although she spoke very little, I enjoyed her refined conversations with her friends. It was the time for me to leave with my ice-cream parcel. I looked back to see her one last time. Before I hold the door knob, her eyes found mine in a split second and all I saw a faint smile and a mouthful spoon of ice-cream making its way to her mouth!


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    Gosh you know how to describe the finest details of someone you have some much to say but little to know, because she or he was not ready to face your descriptive personality.
    Good to read your post after a long time of disconnect
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    Quote Originally Posted by THE SHED View Post
    Gosh you know how to describe the finest details of someone you have some much to say but little to know, because she or he was not ready to face your descriptive personality.
    Good to read your post after a long time of disconnect
    Thank you The Shed
    Your words are most appreciated.
    I'm good at descriptive writing, even though I should refine it more in order to elevate my writing style.

    Anyways, Eid Mubarak everyone
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