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12/03/2012 11:54 AM #1عضو نشيط
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وردة::وردة: It's Time to komw that ~I Love You~
I Love You and I can't say it To you
I Love You and I wish To See You
I Love You and I wish To Meet You
I Love You and I wish To Live with You[/COLOR]
I Miss You every My Day's Moments and
I can't say that for You every Day
I am nothing without You and
I can't tell You that whenYou are beside me
I am Lonely in this Life withOuT You
and I can't tell You that
I don't want You To Lose a tear
From Your honey eyes For me
I want You To be beside Me
Every Moments in this life
I need You My Love My heart
withOuT You is Incomplete
I need To touch Your Love For Me
I need To touch Your Heart To know
Your Real Love For Me
Don't Let Go
I need You so
Don't Let me cry
I need You So
Don't Let Me Sad
I need You So
Don't Let Me Lose My simle
I need You So
I have no Person To Save Me From
Pains Of Life WithOuT You
I try to Disappear My Great Love FOr You
BuT I can't My heart doesn't let me Disappear
This Truth !!!!
I LOve You 4 ever
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13/03/2012 12:40 AM #2
Romeo it is a dangerous bussiness
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13/03/2012 03:23 PM #3Don't Let me cry
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14/03/2012 10:40 AM #4E.F. Creative writer
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To know lah !
OF needs a closer look!
God be with you Mods.
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Hey
Nice try dear
However you need to re-word your poem dear and make it more readable and feel able as a romantic poem.
I suggest you should not translate the lateral words of Arabic to English you should look for alternative words resembles what you want to present or mean.
If you need a review or somebody to give you a helping hand, please do ask you will always find somebody will be keen to help.
All the best mate and good effort for trying
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15/03/2012 04:42 PM #6عضو مميز جداً
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I am nothing without You_seriously!!
if ya r nothing without her ya'll still be NOthing with her - at least that is the way I see it :S
nice start and good luck
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17/03/2012 11:36 AM #7
sweeet,,,,good luck
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17/03/2012 11:45 AM #8
كيف حالكم
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31/03/2012 12:55 PM #9خاطر
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